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Barry Tipping
{K:959} 7/13/2002
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Very pretty Marty. Good exposure, nice composition. You might try tweeking the color saturation of her body so there's not too much contrast with her facial makeup.
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Kim Culbert
{K:37013} 7/13/2002
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Very creative, colourful and detailed. Love how the colour of the roses match her lipstick...
One thing... you've called it Pedals... like on a bike... did you mean Petals? *grin*
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Petros Stamatakos
{K:12101} 7/13/2002
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I know very little about studio lights, but I think you've done very well here. Once thing that stands out is that the make-up although it has been applied very well, it does however show a different tone to the rest of the body. I would be trying to match the makeup to the rest of the body. Very nice photo by the way!
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Matt Oulman
{K:1052} 7/13/2002
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Very sensual photo, well lit- but it is ruined by those clunky barges on her feet! This would have been much, much better in bare feet.
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William R Eastman III
{K:2141} 7/13/2002
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You are going to wear out your model or your lens with shots like this, Marty.
The shot's great. The boats don't bother me--maybe a couple inches further away from her butt. I like the clever petal by the ear balancing the petal by the shoe. A subtle touch, like a signature, that we do for ourselves, realizing that most people won't appreciate.
It doesn't bother me that her face is partially covered by her arm--this is a personal touch--and I like it the way it is. Be aware that by throwing her shoulder that way you are exposing a lot of meat which has a tendancy of upstaging her face. I'm constantly dealing with this in the human form.
Shooting glamour like this I've often moved away from seamless to muslum--you can put padding, pillows, etc underneath to lift the head, etc. and shoot down. I've often used a step ladder to straddle the client where I can shoot down getting a head or head and upper body that is very flattering.
Your lighting is clean and fine.
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Marty Provost
{K:1760} 7/15/2002
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Thank you all. I thought I had already responded to you on this one, but I don't see it.
Still working on the face to body color tone. I'll get it right eventually! ;)
Kim, thanks for the spelling notice.
William, can you suggest a muslim for me?
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