Nice tight fashion shot Marty. Good exposure. Only real flaw is the rumpled front of her dress and the frill that protrudes excessively. Also, with subjects with a "full" nose, you've got to avoid too much profile... Let's see some more of this series...
Thanks Barry. The rumpled shirt doesn't necessarily bother me but I certainly see that it would be better without it. Regarding her nose: she has features that made my job a bit tough. Thanks again for the feedback. I think you and I really help eachother. At least you help me. :)