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Bill Akata
{K:2926} 9/13/2002
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Ohmigod, is this a portrait of the "Frog Princess" Chelesea Burke!! WOW.
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Marty Provost
{K:1760} 9/13/2002
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Bill, you had me quite confused for a bit until I found Chelsea Burke's page here. No it's not the same Chelsea.
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Barry Tipping
{K:959} 9/13/2002
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Marty,
Usual comments about cropping hands...exposure is a little hot. This model has interesting eyes...try for some closeups that accentuate her eyes.
Where's Adrienne? ;)
Adrienne! Adrienne! Adrienne!
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meprivacynet@meprivacy.net meprivacynet@meprivacy.net
{K:3974} 9/13/2002
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Marty I really like your work and I'm very sorry to say but in my amateur option this picture is the worst picture in your portfolio
The overexposed left chick makes a big blind spot on her face. Because of it my attention goes to the next visible object - the nose. Nose shadow, mixed with the hairline makes model's nose very long and wide at the end...
She has no arms and it is very visible. It also looks like her left foot is missing. Last thing, if I look at the center of your picture something tells me ..."out of shape"...
Please come over and destroy my work!!
Serenity NOW!
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Marty Provost
{K:1760} 9/13/2002
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You guys crack me up! :)
Barry, I couldn't be too "strict" in the photo shoot since it was her first time so I hope to get better shots next time. She's already asked for another shoot. :) In regards to the image being a bit hot; that's something I'm still working on with the new digital camera. I say still, but this was only my 3rd shoot with it. ;) It seems to be much more sensitive than film. In regards to where's Adrienne, take a look at my personal site at www.StealYourSoul.com. I have posted the recent shots of her since they are not usefilm appropriate. If you feel so inclined I'd love to get your feedback on them.
Ivan, your HONEST opinion is very much appreciated! As long as no offense is intended, no offense is taken. I don't take feedback personally. In fact all the feedback I've gotten has helped me progress MUCH faster than I ever could have without it. As I said I'm still working on hot spots with the new digital camera and hope to have that completely resolved soon. The model (my friend) has several/many features that require a lot more from me than I'm used to, which is great because it a challenges me in areas I need. I'd like to add that I have really enjoyed your posts as well and hope over time we can continue to help each other reach new levels.
In short, GO TEAM! and thank you. ;)
-Marty
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Marty Provost
{K:1760} 9/13/2002
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Barry, I forgot to add that I've got some closeups that I will post later tonight that really show her eyes. What's really cool is that the eyes look amazing and she was wearing colored contacts.
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meprivacynet@meprivacy.net meprivacynet@meprivacy.net
{K:3974} 9/13/2002
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yep, we're here for you :)
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