Hi Deborah~! I have some advice. whether it's digital, or custom printed B&W, the best way to edit your image for burning dodging and croping is to step back a couple feet from your image and squint your eyes. (i know this sounds like a joke) looking at your image like this helps draw your attention towards highlights and shadows, now what do you see? The strong highlights on the left and right of the model? These need to be toned down a bit. The model's shirt is also competing with her face. I think that there's alot of potential with shots like this, just need to tweak them a bit. I sure hope this helps. -sv