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Image Title: Tracy in lace top
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| Photographer |
Kim Taylor {K:2816}
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| Project |
N/A
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Camera Model |
finepix 2800z
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| Categories |
Portrait
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Lens |
12mm
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| Uploaded |
10/30/2003 |
Film / Memory Type |
digital 100iso
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ISO / Film Speed |
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691 |
Shutter |
1/11s
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| Favorites |
0
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Aperture |
2.8 |
| Critiques |
3 |
Rating |
Pending
/ 2 Ratings
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| Location |
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| About |
Tracy in mixed lighting, fluorescent and tungsten spots.
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Random Pictures By:
Kim
Taylor
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There are 3 Comments in 1 Pages
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Yannic Meerbergen
{K:2990} 10/30/2003
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Well, Kim. This image has a lot of interesting features, but a few problems too.
1/ It's a lot too posed. It's unnatural, and the model doesn't feel comfortable. And the position of her left arm is "bizarre".
2/ It's too centered. Try putting the model on the 1/3 of the image, it adds dynamism.
3/ The overall light is OK, but there is a light spot on her nose that's not so lucky, and I would have added a back light to separate her from the background.
4/ I don't really like those two horizontal bars coming out of her (but for that one, I don't see what you could have done.. Maybe PS them out?)
It's a nice start. If you have the opportunity to reshoot it, I'm sure you will do a lot better.
Regards.
Y
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David R. Fink
{K:1792} 10/30/2003
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Hi Kim,
I've had a look at your gallery....eclectic indeed! And some wonderful work there. I like especially "Ami 3". Will keep an eye on your posts.
Best wishes,
David
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Roberto Arcari Farinetti
{K:192044} 10/30/2003
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nice pose and model.. great "clearly" but the light is much "yellow"
regrads
roby
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