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Ray Witter
{K:6149} 11/13/2003
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Burak,
This is a good composition, I really like the figure on the right being contrasted by the wooden wall on the right, gives it a balance somehow.
The woman seems to be a little out of focus however. A little more depth of field may have improved the image.
Just some random thoughts.
Good Work!!
Reguards,
ray w.
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Erdem Calisgan
{K:4050} 11/13/2003
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Konuyu urkutmeden cekebileceginiz en yakin mesafe buydu galiba, bu kompozisyon sanirim zor bir kompozisyon yani daha dogrusu burdaki ortamdan bahsediyorum. Bir suru sert cizgi var ve galiba goze hos gozukmesi icin bu cizgilerin fotografta cok uyumlu durmasi gerek. Mesela soldaki ahsap kaplamanin cizgileri tabana tam paralel olsaydi v.s. v.s. dikkatle siz de bakinca fotografiniza cizgilerin nasil olmasi gerektigini gorursunuz mutlaka... Tebrikler basarilar... (Netlik falan onlar bence bunlar kadar onemli degil)
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In Transit
{K:29394} 12/19/2003
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Only would have liked to have a bit more a sharper focus upon the Thinker!
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Harlan Heald
{K:13990} 12/21/2003
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Good photojournalism! Nicely composed and captured.
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Ronny Van Eeckhoutte
{K:12734} 2/8/2004
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Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jorge Vasconcelos
{K:33746} 3/13/2004
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Nice composition.A little "unsharp mask" could help a bit.
Regards and thanks for your comments to my pictures,
jorge
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