I think this could be a very powerful statement if the photo was not bisected both ways. I would change my viewpoint to raise the hill half the distance to the top and shift the palm trunk to the right to obscure that tree on the right. In fact, both of the background trees are distracting to me--are they far enough away to blur the background and get rid of them that way? I'm not sure if you could get that extreme and angle and still include the top fronds, which I think are important to the composition.