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Michael Grace-Martin
{K:10263} 12/22/2003
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I see what you're trying to do with the spot on her face and upper chest ("romantically" highlighting it) and this could be nice, but the dark shadows on her hands and lower pelvis detract too much in this case, I think. What do you think about a closer crop--something like below? I really admire your persistence (a shot per day no matter what) and think you've done some excellent work..:)
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Roberto Arcari Farinetti
{K:192044} 12/22/2003
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nice portrait and pose..
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Isaac Shaw
{K:2563} 12/24/2003
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Kim,
I'm only an egg but wanted to add my $.05 for whatever it might be worth. Overall, I really love your work. Your images are all always very pleasing to behold; including this one.
Although I'm certainly not confident enough (yet) to try this type of lighting, I certainly see where Michael is going and agree. I also wanted to add that the light on her thigh is distracting as it contrasts sharply with the rest of her body.
Otherwise, beautiful model, beautiful pose and great lighting effect on her upper torso.
Congrats.
Isaac
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Paul Lara
{K:86876} 1/27/2004
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I LOVE this shot! Very alluring, yet domestic as well. Comfy.
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