A good imgae but I dont think that the model should be looking towads the camera on this one. It seems to ruin the effect that it would otherwise have. Instead I would have her close her eyes slightly or simply look forwards.
Dan, A very expressive shot. It would have been nice if you had taken the photo a bit more from the front. I think that would have increased the expression. Maybe even with a fill flash at a slower shutter speed to add some motion. I like the lighting as it is, though.