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Photographer peta jones {K:12615}
Project #16 Poetry in Pictures Camera Model Olympus 5050
Categories Photoart
Film Format
Portfolio photoart
Lens attached
Uploaded 1/9/2004 Film / Memory Type n/a
    ISO / Film Speed 0
Views 527 Shutter 1/60
Favorites Aperture f/2.8
Critiques 47 Rating Critique Only Image
Location City - 
State - 
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About see comment, song by my daughter Brooke 2 years ago.
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There are 47 Comments in 1 Pages
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peta jones   {K:12615} 1/9/2004
Spilt

I?ve spread myself so thin
I can?t find the pieces
You tell me you love me
But what do you want from me?
Is it my body
Or my personality
You just want all of me
Why can?t you try and see

Everyone?s pulling
And taking my soul away
Trying to get a piece
But they can?t get enough
You couldn?t understand
Half what you do to me
Pick at my weaknesses
Learn from my enemies

I can?t look both ways
The ways that you want me to
Look and I cannot see
Things that you want me to
Maybe you hate me
Or maybe you don?t
But I don?t need your anger
I don?t need your civility

I never wanted this
I gave you all I could
It never was enough
To appease a jealous god
I don?t belong to you
I don?t belong to him
I don?t belong to her
Put me together again

I feel like a baby
That?s between two mothers
Each one says they own me
But which one can love me
They offer to cut me up
Give each a piece of me
That what they want to do
You?d let them, wouldn?t you


Carolyn Wiesbrock   {K:14051} 1/9/2004
Very strong image..love it!


Haleh B   {K:3741} 1/9/2004
A sign of frustration or just pure tension...I am not sure but I feel its intensity! The song written by your daughter is so deep. A plea for sanity...very strong. Your image is only complimenting her poetic talent.


Monty Emken (Ostracon X)   {K:4804} 1/9/2004
Drammatic and absolutely beautiful Peta.
Cheers!


Tim Bronkhorst   {K:9391} 1/9/2004
Wonderfull, the colors and detail, it's painting like!
Greets Tim.


Javed Rassi   {K:8224} 1/9/2004
Expressive and emotive, interesting work, I like it Peta.


jo pez   {K:2958} 1/9/2004
...nice one...
...nice to me...:)


John Strazza   {K:12035} 1/9/2004
Peta, what i like so much is that you as an artist and person seem to be so alive - feeling things, easy and hard ... your daughter seems also to be like you and yet so much herself asd an individual .. i so admire it all ... she is a good writer and i'm sure even more so now .. you are so alive in all you show - again i so admire that .. this is very much a powerful image with a bit of softness somewhere in it .. it may be because the hands are young looking - as always you make treasures that require more than just a short look - and yet for those that only look at things quickly - even they walk away with something more than they had before walking into your space ...


Terry McCully   {K:9221} 1/9/2004
Perfect looking work here.. this is Simply Fantastic.... BRAVO on everything to do with this photo!!!


Sonia ~   {K:2125} 1/9/2004
Great image Peta, I love the PS work that you do....wish I can learn it too!


Don Loseke   {K:32503} 1/9/2004
A great moody picture. Love the deep tones and your texture. A great song from you daughter.. Very nice. Don.


ADAM ORZECHOWSKI   {K:7957} 1/9/2004
Fantastic picture.I like it.This is my FAVORITE !!! Regards


Stefan Engström   {K:24473} 1/9/2004
... and the image is already in CD-cover format... I particularly like the choices you made in texture and contrast in your presentation. Not nits this time :-)


Alexey Sapa   {K:27168} 1/9/2004
Great!!!


GP Merfeld   {K:14396} 1/9/2004
An image as eloquent in vision as the poem is with words. Beautifully effective toning and texturing, with exquisite light and dynamic composition. I really feel the sense of vulnerability with the thumbs enclosed within the fists... Outstanding work, Peta...


Antonio Trincone   {K:23167} 1/9/2004
yes nice image I agree


Cherie Spike   {K:-21959} 1/9/2004
Peta - you are mega talented... phew can't get over this amazing image.. in my faves.. I'll continue to fly with the magic that way

Bombastic compliments
Cherie
p.s. kisses to you and Brooke... miss the photo and tell her she's simply gorgeous


MaryBell    {K:32791} 1/9/2004
graphic like a sculpture - I think the grain in this really contributes to the graphic feel of this - the hardness and the strength.


Alberto Agnoletti   {K:12808} 1/9/2004
FANTASTIC WORK!!!!!
This is photoart!
Best regards, Alberto


Barry Walthall   {K:5319} 1/9/2004
Absolutely gorgeous image,Peta....and I love your daughters lyrics....excellent work.


Anne Knes   {K:60438} 1/9/2004
Absolutely beautiful .congrat anne...


Ana Vianna   {K:15270} 1/9/2004
Fantastic!!! Strong!!! Wonderful!!! ( My favorites!!!)
Regards, Peta!


Roberto Arcari Farinetti   {K:192044} 1/9/2004
hi peta..
magnific idea!
expressive and perfect composition..
roby


Fabio Keiner   {K:49356} 1/9/2004
extraordinary tense and telling


Anna    {K:2994} 1/9/2004
Fantastic Photo Art! You can feel the tension in this image... Congratulations, Peta! Hugs
Anna


Anna Pagnacco   {K:7448} 1/9/2004
Strong......Great image.Hugs, Anna


. .   {K:16329} 1/9/2004
You're so handy with PS. [sorry:)] The gold toning and light are marvelous. And, you exactly have the tension and angst of the lyrics. Good one, Peta!!


Mari Mar   {K:11417} 1/9/2004
Like it a lot! good composition, Peta!


Mari Mar   {K:11417} 1/10/2004
Like the song, sent you an email. Las manos son maravillosas!


Antonella Nistri   {K:21867} 1/10/2004
Peta,again you leave me speechless,you're simply on a higher level! Antonella


lowell whipple girbes   {K:13181} 1/10/2004
very expresive
wonderful tone


Marília Ferraz   {K:-4496} 1/10/2004
Peta, you have spread yourself so huge,
you are an entire artist
I do love you
What do I want from you?
More of your immense talent
More of your sensibility
Yes, I I want all of you
I've tried and I saw it, dear friend.

Hugs and much love for this outstanding hands.
Marília


sandy c. hopkins   {K:17107} 1/10/2004
hey peta! i didn;t even see this and i posted some hands today as well!
:)

yours are fantastic! lots of strenth and frustration is what i see...
the two together making a powerful impact.
great work! and your daughters work is a pleasant kiss for the piece


Craig Garland   {K:27077} 1/10/2004
Peta; another powerful image. The subject, composition, lighting, texture, toning are all wonderful, but those are all "techniques"-- what's really wonderful about this image is your vision. This photo absolutely bleeds emotion and it's going into my faves. I love it, and I'm really enjoying watching your talent and creativity build and unfold here on UF. Thanks for the inspiration, and Cheers. Craig


Dave M   {K:9043} 1/11/2004
BRAVA!


Carol Watson   {K:5185} 1/11/2004
Nice emotional statement both in the pose and in the post-production treatment!


Orazio Minnella   {K:48355} 1/11/2004
Great elaboration!,Good details and excellent lights, and composition.
Regards...Orazio


Massimo Di Maggio   {K:-55858} 1/11/2004
I can?t understand the whole lyric with my english, but I feel that she?s a good writer, instead I can see well the poetry, the melancholy and the beauty that there are in the photo, your great technique also gives me great emotions. Bye Max


Emgy Massidda   {K:60226} 1/11/2004
Impressive work, Peta
Amazing toning, texture and details
An image with a great feel.
My conpliments to your daughter for her beautiful lyrics
Best regards


Naty Z   {K:16486} 1/12/2004
strong image for an intense lyric, you girls are great!


B:)liana    {K:30945} 1/12/2004
Oh, yes. great great superbe technic and effects dear Peta ;-) Love it so much. very powerful.
Kiss, biliana


Ken Williams   {K:862} 1/13/2004
Yes ! ...... (-;


Tomo Radovanovic   {K:12788} 1/13/2004
great work!!


Hakan Aker   {K:14146} 1/15/2004
Beautiful


Amancio Couto   {K:15720} 1/27/2004
I love that!...congrats Peta!...hug


Roy Vanover   {K:13432} 1/29/2004
Beautiful Photo! "I love the tone"
Roy


Jani Salvataggio   {K:26853} 5/20/2004
Excellent composition and work!!!!
regards
Jani


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