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Darren Lucey
{K:277} 3/8/2004
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The grain of the 400 film is a greaat choise. She has amazing eyes, but I might limit the lighting sources the 3 highlights in the eyes seems a bit much for me. They also make something called a Black silk (made for film shooting) that gives the most amazing eye lights. You can email me if you want to know more.
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Carlheinz Bayer
{K:14220} 3/8/2004
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In general this is a really nice shoot!!! You've asked for feedback; here is mine. I agree on the catchlight, but you can easily clone 2 spots out and make the remaining one bigger. If you really work with 3 light sources I would spend one for the hair to get some highlight or a rim. The skin looks a bit burned out on my screen; but it might be my monitor. The crop: I would crop from the top and the bottom and spend some room on the RHS. The shoulder looks very massive on the picture. This is not very pleasing for that beautiful model. This is something personal; I'm not so crazy about the two straps. I think a shirt or a turtle neck would be better. You're on the right track and you have a great model. Cheers! Carlheinz
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Gabriella Carta
{K:22841} 3/8/2004
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beautiful portrait. Regards by Gabry
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Ana Vianna
{K:15270} 3/8/2004
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Beautiful portrait! Congrats!
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Maya Bylina
{K:5925} 3/9/2004
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a lovely portrait! Best wishes!
Maya
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King Chicken
{K:1481} 3/10/2004
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better lighting in this one,, but her hair is dry, and needs atention, lol :)
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Çetin Lütfi Baydar
{K:1637} 3/13/2004
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nice shot,
congrats
Ps: there may be hipertyroidy. the right eye has an exophthalmia. model must be seen a doktor (specialist of endocrinology)
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