The background on the left side does not bother me, if you had gotten the whole background to have included more of the left side, and it is a bit as they say "hot" on the left shoulder, this to me would be an absolutely refreshing, and beautiful portrait.
I agree with Gary on the film speed but also I never shoot anything else but tranny's 100 Rated at 70 or 50 rated at 32....I disagree about the camera left backround it Works, it puts a setting to the mood....the building line coming out of the head doesnt...one step to your right would have solved that..like the light on her and the pensive pose....