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Fabio Keiner
{K:51705} 4/16/2004
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racing through space
:)
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Pawel Cz
{K:981} 4/16/2004
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impression .. nice
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Joćo Carlos Gomes
{K:373} 4/16/2004
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well done and composed.
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Pablo Zaremba
{K:2870} 4/17/2004
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Muy sugestiva. Me gusta mucho la atmosfera y creo que la foto podria tranquilamente precindir del titulo.
Saludos desde Milan,
Pablo.
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Taras R. Hnatyshyn
{K:4055} 4/19/2004
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Featured Critique
Jose Luis,
Most people taking pictures of star trails tend to avoid the nights with the moon. This is original from that respect. In this image, there is little detail below the horizon. Maybe a flash, or better yet a flashlight (torch) could have been used to add some details there. If the horizon wasn't so flat, this wouldn't be needed. This type of image may work better on color film. It is good to see someone else pointing their Hasselblad to the heavens...
Taras
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Timothy R
{K:3022} 4/21/2004
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Wow, that must have been something to see in person!
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B:)liana
{K:30945} 4/23/2004
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wow..g raet one ;-)
Kiss, Biliana
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Kostas Tzanetos
{K:22012} 4/24/2004
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hello Jose :-)
I like your picture since I'm a fan of star trails myself,and it's not usual to shoot them in B/W. I agree with Taras in that some foreground detail would help,but my suggestion would be to move much closer to this ship wreck and compose your picture with it dominating the foreground and the trails filling the sky. I know that it would be very difficult since you would need a boat to get closer,but this is not my problem... (just joking :-)
my best regards,
Kostas
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Adam Borkowski
{K:1335} 4/25/2004
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very good
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Bulent Ahiskal
{K:1251} 5/5/2004
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Excellent shot.
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Terry McCully
{K:9221} 5/14/2004
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WOW.. a star trail photo that I missed... and a black and white one at that! I'm a big fan of Star trails and do not come across them done in B&W very often. This is a great shot. I do agree with maybe a bit of forground detail with off camera flash or a flashlight. Not sure.. this could be a double exposure with the sun setting then the trails done on top of that... or the moon rise... you don't tell us so you let us guess. You may want to clean up your scan a tiny bit in photoshop as I can see what appears to be a few "S" shapped hairs on the scan. No matter this is still a great shot!
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zosia zija
{K:11366} 5/17/2004
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great
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NEVRUZ EBRU AKSU
{K:188} 6/23/2004
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keep saying: simple is the best :)
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Susie Lin
{K:218} 11/4/2004
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Simple composition, but yet so lovely.
Its like a painting in the sky, and absolutely outstanding patterns.
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Ivan Di Pietro
{K:1229} 3/21/2006
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Wonderful !!
ivan
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