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Mesmerising II
Image Title:  Mesmerising II
 
 By: Hugo de Wolf  
  Copyright ©2004



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Photographer Hugo de Wolf {K:184981}
Project #40 Street Photography Camera Model Nikon F100
Categories Architecture
Cityscape
Travel
Film Format
Portfolio Dossier Iran
Lens Nikon  28-105mm f/3.5-4.5D IF AF
Uploaded 5/8/2004 Film / Memory Type Fuji  NPH
    ISO / Film Speed 400
Views 560 Shutter 1/1500
Favorites Aperture f/16
Critiques 46 Rating
5.20
/ 28 Ratings
Location City -  Shiraz
State - 
Country - Iran   Iran
About One of the many mosques in Shiraz, Iran. The liveliness of the place at mid day and the orange trees in the front made it a picturesque scene. This day was what turned out to be the last chilly day of winter, but with the strengthening sun, the short spring and scorching hot summer already announced themselves.

All comments are, as usual, very much appreciated.

Cheers,

Hugo
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Mesmerising I

There are 46 Comments in 1 Pages
  1
Teunis Haveman   {K:52497} 5/8/2004
Hallo Hugo
Weer meer tijd zie ik
Wie kan nu zulke schitterende foto,s maken
Hugo natuurlijk.
Wat een kleuren en wat een licht
Hoe krijg je het voorelkaar
Groet Teunis


Chris Spracklen   {K:32552} 5/8/2004
Hi Hugo! Amazing structure and craftsmanship!
I like it all except the cables hanging down from the top ~ I think I'd have cloned them out as they're a little distracting.
Fine shot nonetheless.
Kind regards, Chris


Sunset Man   {K:11681} 5/8/2004
I was really hoping as many many others that II & III would be better!


Kam Broumand   {K:828} 5/8/2004
Hi Hugo,

Wonderful shot! Excellent composition. The colors are amazing. I know the difficulty with cables,(as mentioned by Chris) alot of my shots taken in Iran have/had cables hanging around, but then again i guess they are sometimes part of the image.

great work!

Kamyar


Saeed Al Shamsi   {K:47543} 5/8/2004
This one is an excellent idea that takes us a way from the obvious monuments or museum,life shot,vertical tree beside wonderful decorative "Mosque",life element humen and water,pity those beautiful places left with ugly wires and cables around them,great image,Saeed


giuliano antonio colivicchi   {K:153} 5/8/2004
Absolutely a banal shot.
A mediocre composition and too oversatured.


Richard Thornton   {K:26442} 5/8/2004
Well Hugo, I'm back after a little layoff. This gives a lot of detail, making it an excellent travel shot. I like you inclusion of a figure in the foreground. What are those wires draping down from the spire? Maybe leading to ground from a lightning arrestor?


Stephen Bowden   {K:64519} 5/8/2004
Wonderful architecture Hugo and the colours are super


Carmem A. Busko   {K:48763} 5/8/2004
Hi, Hugo, I missed you!
Perfect picture again.. with human presence to give sense of scale.
Thank you for your recent comments!
Cheers,
Carmem


Roger Cotgreave   {K:15892} 5/8/2004
wow a great looking building...how old would it be? Well taken Hugo..rog


Roberto Arcari Farinetti   {K:177809} 5/8/2004
a nice architecture shot.. nice one.. nice perspective and compo!
roby


Getulio Melo   {K:6481} 5/8/2004
Amazing colors and beautiful composition, Hugo! Great shot.


Roger Williams   {K:83282} 5/8/2004
Hugo, I normally like to see all three photos in your triptychs before I comment, but by the time I am ready to comment much of what could and should be said has already been said by many, many others. So forgive me if I don't always comment. I do always enjoy, and pause to look and learn. I also value your continued comments on my efforts.


M. Tigrek   {K:2289} 5/8/2004
Very nice Hugo,
Well composed with beautiful colors.
I also like a man walking, and other (sitting just entrance)
My best regards.


tom rumland   {K:14874} 5/8/2004
hugo, i don't know about this one. seems a bit centered ;^) i assume the wires coming down from the cupola are connected to loadspeakers used to broadcast prayers, no? i think changing your position to the right and including one of the corners of the building would definitely help. this would show at least one loudspeaker and give the viewer an idea as to what the wires are for.

take care,
tom


Regina Rianelli   {K:24147} 5/8/2004
Great picture, Hugo! what a beautiful architecture... soo many little details!
Thanks for sharing this precious with us!!!

Veel SUCCCESS!!!

Best regards,
Regina


Pedro Libório   {K:53855} 5/8/2004
impressive architecture!!!
love the colors and the human presence...
very beautiful image!!!


Gerhard Hoogterp   {K:6461} 5/8/2004
Great and sunny photo. I like it how you always put a person somewhere in the photo to give scale to the things.. Well done!


Kees and Carolyn    {K:15193} 5/8/2004
Beautiful photo! The mosque is incredible with such intricate detail! The whole photo picks up such minute detail. Lovely colors! I like this one alot!
Carolyn


Raamses Ortiz   {K:4408} 5/8/2004
Hi Hugo,

I don't know what to say. Is beautiful, the colors and composition. I like very much the man on the photo. He seams like looking up and I like it. Too bad about the cables, I know you couldn't do anything abput them, I have had the same problem too.

Congrats,

Be seeing you...

Raamses.


Hermen Pen   {K:9117} 5/8/2004
Nice peaceful scene, good colours!
Like many other viewers I was struck by the disturbing cables, I wonder why they are not concealed? I don't mean in Photoshop, but in reality :)


Carlheinz Bayer   {K:14220} 5/8/2004
Hey Hugo! Are the colors really real? The blue? WOW! Fine details with a good comp. Lots to see. Like it! Carlheinz


Hugo de Wolf   {K:184981} 5/8/2004
Hi Tom, I know... It's centered...;o) And yes, I think you are right, the wires run to the minarets to broadcast the imams call for prayers. I decided to leave them in (and not to clone them out), as they do represent the actual settings.

As to my position, I did try to take this shot from a position a bit more to my right, but then I would run into a problem with the pond, which would either be distracting or reintroduce the centered aspect. Attached is a wider overview (different shot from the same location. I choose this one, as I think the diagonals are a bit stronger in this one, whereas the attached one is a bit unbalanced, I think. A small difference, though. Taken with a 28 mm lens, the distortion by the third vanishing point is still visible (I did correct that in the shot I posted, but the colours are genuine) Wonder what you think; is the attached photo better?

Cheers,

Hugo



Carlheinz Bayer   {K:14220} 5/8/2004
Hey Hugo! What do you think about that?



Hugo de Wolf   {K:184981} 5/8/2004
Hi Carlheinz, That's much better... It's what I did with the original one, too. It struck me as odd that the third vanishing point was already as heavy as this with a 28mm.... Can't wait to see the results of my new 17mm....;o)

Know the book "the Photoshop book for digital photographers" by Kelby? An excellent manual, possibly also very useful for your gig shots.... A bible, so to say...;o)

Don't know if you read my reply to Tom, but it also addresses your first comment; the colours are genuine... Did use a PL filter, though.

Cheers,

Hugo


Carlheinz Bayer   {K:14220} 5/8/2004
Hey Hugo! Yes I own the book and it's great. I should read more of it ;-) but I'm more the trial and error kind of guy. It's hard to see a difference but I've also copied and multiplied the background layer but just used 10% opacity. I think it would be great to "fix" the overexposed foreground. Yes and I forgot to mention that I like both but tend to the second one. Has IMHO a better atmosphere. Cheers! Carlheinz


Hugo de Wolf   {K:184981} 5/8/2004
Hi Carlheinz, Same here.... I keep it besides my computer, but need to catch up on my reading. I also use the multiply layer option (on occasion), very nifty feature. I did tweak the levels in the original one a bit, and burned the foreground. It's not so much an overexposed image, but more of a bad scan.

As to the atmosphere, I shifted back and forth between this one and the original one. Today, I'm with the second one again, although I still think this one is a bit more "common" or "standard"

I just wrote a lengthy comment on your first Holga shot, with two URLs in it, but I don't think it posted properly.... Hope it still does, but let me know if it doesn't, and I'll try to retype it.

Cheers,

Hugo


Carlheinz Bayer   {K:14220} 5/8/2004
Hi Hugo! I was just missing some details in the "overexposed area". To multiply layers AND use the eraser; that's the killer. Try this with "old" dark room technics! LOL
And man, get a scanner!!! ;-)
Comments on my Holgas? Nope!
Cheers! Carlheinz


Hugo de Wolf   {K:184981} 5/9/2004
I will get a decent scanner.... I will, I will, I will! But give me a break! It is a pitiful excuse for a over exposed photo...;o)

I'll be back on the holga one....

Cheers,

Hugo


Dan Lightner   {K:12684} 5/9/2004
Hugo , now this is what you do best , excellent as usual.And again love the lone figure .

Regards Dan


WALT MESK   {K:10731} 5/9/2004
very very good.walt.


Antonella Nistri   {K:21867} 5/9/2004
Hugo,I cannot understand why a couple people are being so impolite to you. The composition and light are perfect,so what's the point? Why such a low rating?
Is it a crime to represent the reality the way it is without flashy effects?
What if the cables are there? They have a purpose!
In my opinion it's a very good reportage/travel photo and thanking you for sharing, I give you 7 and not because I'm trying to flatter you,but because a photographer like you,who has delivered true pieces of art, can afford also to post simpler photos which show real places and real atmospheres.
Please ignore the rudeness,you are GREAT and do not have to prove anything to anyone!
With my greatest appreciation for all of your work, Antonella


John Loreaux   {K:85782} 5/9/2004
This is so interesting My friend Hugo!I love to view the many cultures of the world and the Iranian Photos You have taken show a world very few of Us in the U.S. get to see!Nice that You get to Show us!! Thank You for Your kind comments to Me and I agree with You about cropping on 'The Net" Photo! Thanks for Your valued critique! Have a great day Hugo! My best always!! JOHN


Jeff Cartwright   {K:52046} 5/9/2004
Hi!...Hugo: I See Carlheinz Bayer! Has Been Very Adapt in removing the Offending Lines...Well Done!...Otherwise Excellent Original!!!
Best Regards:
Jeff.

Thank you, for your Comments, Hugo!...Jeff!!!


tom rumland   {K:14874} 5/9/2004
hugo, i don't know that you can say one is "better" than the other as they are completely different. i like that you left the wires in the photo. i would like to see where they go and resolve some of the tension. if you can't see the purpose of the wires they become an obstruction.

this attachment is not to show how i would've cropped it but more to show what i would've included. to include these i would've shot it from a sitting position on the far end of the pond looking up. yes, that would've increased the distortion but hey, i really like distortion. ;^) what do you think?

in summary, my preference lies somewhere between your two shots.

take care,
tom

PS - natural colors?? VERY nice! i like them quite a bit.



Carlheinz Bayer   {K:14220} 5/9/2004
UUPPPSSS! Now I need to defend myself. I didn't remove the power lines; they kind of got lost. I think the desicion to remove them, depends on the additional information you give to a picture. Hugo usually adds a "story" to his pictures. If you want to have a postcard like picture I would remove them. If you mention them as part of the story everything changes. Then they make totally sense and are very welcome IMHO.
Cheers! Carlheinz


Bobby Mun   {K:3688} 5/10/2004
Hi Hugo, wonderful shot... Maybe the picture is cropped too tight... if you can zoom out and off center, it will look better. Amazing color just a little bit exposed :>

Thanks for sharing... it is a wonderful structure.

Cheers ! Bobby


Maria Luisa Vial   {K:36017} 5/10/2004
Hi Hugo... Welcome back... I missed you...

I like very much the shot!!! Except for the cables which everybody told you about...

I think that as much as you don't like it... you are going to be needing to use photoshop to correct this problems ... :)

Cheers,

Maria


Kristina Kohut   {K:49990} 5/11/2004
Very tasteful composition and so interesting and beautiful building! Extremely strong light and no over exposures or ugly shadows, very well done!


B:)liana    {K:30945} 5/11/2004
wonderful architecture. but dont you think Hugo that you could contrast it a little bit?!?!? or it is me!??!/!
Kiss, BIliana


Emgy Massidda   {K:60169} 5/14/2004
Hi Hugo
I'm always very impressed at the beauty of the architecture you reguarly show us through your images. I don't remember having seen this mosque before. If I had, I don't think I would have forgotten it cause it is fascinating. I like this shot a lot particularly for the many interesting details it shows. The colours are vivid and very beautiful. It must have been a gorgeous sunny day. I don't mind the wires (they could be cloned out easily if you wanted) as much as I mind the huge tree on the left covering part of the dome's roundings. However I can imagine that you would have taken this shot from another angle if possible. Finally....I see that there is a bicycle in the shade of the tree on the left. Is it yours, Hugo? I wouldn't be surprised as I do not expect people there to have or use a bike as means of transportation. On the other hand, the presence of a second bicycle under one of the trees on the right, makes me doubt about it. Oh well.....I should stop being so curious!
Great shot, Hugo
Hugs
Emgy


kita mcintosh   {K:18594} 5/16/2004
splendid architecture with stunning colours


Maja Gligoric   {K:13402} 5/21/2004
Great architecture!


Jan Symank   {K:15755} 8/30/2004
What a beautiful mosque
You waited fore a very good moment with the man at a good place in this composition
A very well captured scenary
Groet
Jan


Hugo de Wolf   {K:184981} 8/30/2004
Hi Jan, I really appreciate the time you take to look further back in my portfolio. Thanks! You describe my intention well, it's what I meant with this shot. I do think I've made better shots during my trip to Iran, but I like this one for the exact same reason.

Cheers,

Hugo


Rose Martin   {K:4591} 10/31/2004
Amazing architecture. I love the colors. The sky was in perfect contrast with the colors. Very nice


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