Pictures of Finally spring

Photographer	Vance Lester {K:339}
Project	#15 Personal Style	Camera Model	SRT200
Categories	Fashion	Film Format
Portfolio		Lens	Rokkor 50mm
Uploaded	5/15/2004	Film / Memory Type	Expired Ektachrome 200
		ISO / Film Speed	0
Views	246	Shutter	1/60
Favorites	0	Aperture	f/2.0
Critiques	2	Rating	Pending / 1 Ratings
Location	City - Saskatoon State - SASK Country - Canada
About	Taken one of the first nice days. Much fun was had,shared with the greatest person I know. Lay it on me, I like the feedback. What do you like, what do you hate?

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Andy Pollard {K:1356} 5/15/2004

I think you did a really good job with this composition. Your friend sat perfectly and the placement is great. The shallow depth of field keeps us focused on your main subject. I might have cropped more from the bottom as the fountain edge towards the right seem to distract me. I would have left a little more on the top (Just a tad), the pose is great but to me she seems to be leaning forward to fit the crop.

Richard Thornton {K:26442} 8/5/2004

Ah, you've acheived that elusive "expired Ektachrome" look. Just kidding.

I like the basic pose, the directness of the model's eye contact and you arrangement of elements within the frame. I think the water columns or whatever in the background are blown out and distracting. I would consider at least bringing down the tone a little. In fact, why not abandon the eccentric composition and just crop to a vertical of the subject? After all, she's the reason you made the image!

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