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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185017} 5/24/2004
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Hi Antionio, Going the way of Clifton Jones, are you? Great shot.... I like the camera tilt in this one. The strip of concrete on the right is a tad distracting, thoug, as it reduces the shades of blue. The small triangle on the right is too small to make up for it, IMO. Nonetheless a very good image, I like this one.
Cheers,
Hugo
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Antonio Trincone
{K:23167} 5/24/2004
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Hi Hugo, thanks, don't know the work of Clifton Jones....however I wondered if eliminating the concrete on the left or reducing it would improve or not this image; my final choice has been based mainly on equilibrium between the two part; may be just cropping the triangle defintely could have a good impact
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Di Ciuccio Maurizio
{K:57393} 5/24/2004
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geometrie,prospettiva e colore di ottimo livello..bella..ciao tony..a presto
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Di Ciuccio Maurizio
{K:57393} 5/24/2004
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geometrie,prospettiva e colore di ottimo livello..bella..ciao tony..a presto
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Gino Quattrocchi
{K:39580} 5/24/2004
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volutamente inclini e trasformi linee che già il progettista aveva voluto ardite..e riesci a regalarci una tua visione geometrica e cromatica
molto efficace
bravo
gino
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185017} 5/24/2004
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Hi Antonio, If you can spare the time, I would strongly recommend to take a look at Clifton's work... Worth your while...;o)
And as you mentione equilibrium, I see why the concrete can be something to include in the compositon. Before I read your reply, I made the following crop, also removing the triangle on the right. Is this what you meant?
Cheers,
Hugo
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Carmem A. Busko
{K:48767} 5/25/2004
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Hi, Antonio, I?m not a great critique like Hugo is.. but I agree with his words and like his crop also.
Very impressive work, anyway.
About Clifton?s: there are many good photos about this theme in UF.. every photographer who lives in a big city has to experiment this someday...
Cheers!
Carmem
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WALT MESK
{K:10731} 5/25/2004
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belle geometrie e toni.walt.
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Mauro
{K:5870} 5/28/2004
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Bello il gioco delle finestre colorate e dei toni simili. Originale la visione inclinata. Ciao (7+)
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