Pretty good - interesting forms and basic colors. Is there anyway to maybe try an image where the sign is not directly in the middle but instead on the 1/3 or 2/3 horizontal?
You also could try slicing off the top of the M on Mr so that the script becomes illegible or barely legible. I dunno - I tried a crop as an example.
Thanks for your comments and suggestions, Michael. I tried your idea of moving the sign off of the horizontal centerline - I think it *does* look better following your suggestion (see attached.)