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Randal Dean
{K:4004} 9/25/2004
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That's a fine portrait. To my taste, the figure would be just a little more toward center, and I would remove the light rectangular area on the right. On the whole, really a cool shot.
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Laura Gariano
{K:3255} 9/25/2004
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Nice portrait. I actually like the figure at the extreme side. With the lighting, it gives the mood of him hiding. A shy quality.
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Patrick Jacobson
{K:29151} 10/5/2004
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Great portrait.. love the use of light.. sculpturing the face with shadow! Very nice tones and details.. only thing i would see different to make it whole is to remove the thing to the right in the composition.. aka crop it erlier!
Thanks for your comment on my photos!! =)
Cheers!
Patrick J
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Emrah Onal
{K:3639} 10/5/2004
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yeah!lighting is great on portrait and hand..i relly liked how it slowly fade outs...
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Ned Ali
{K:11925} 10/8/2004
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a great shadow&light play.
I like the way you placed your model in the frame .. but I agree with what others said about the rectangle on the right.
well done Sadaf.
Ned
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