Kim, you're obviously talented. Unfortunately, there is nothing feminine in this model's pose. She looks almost like a man, and the shadow patterns make the skin on her back look old & wrinkled. She doesn't look like she has any waist or butt. This pose just doesn't do a good service to the swim suite she wears. Quite the opposite. I can go on, and on... even without mentioning the burnouts from the uncontrolled direct sunlight. IMHO it's a scrap. Toss it away.