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Shahriar Broumand
{K:692} 3/14/2005
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Fantastic shot Jon - you were right, the model is beautiful.
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ARMANDO ALCÁZAR
{K:42316} 3/14/2005
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wonderful pic my friend, if all the models are so beautiful I want to be in your class too 
God bless you
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audra erin
{K:3768} 3/14/2005
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Wonderful portrait... very real expression, nice angle..light...yeah she's great.
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Hani Ghayhab
{K:3720} 3/14/2005
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Great Portrait!
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Gertrud Gozner
{K:14222} 3/14/2005
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nice angle and beautiful eyes... G.
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Tiffany Hix
{K:5012} 3/25/2005
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Great portrait, nice angle and clarity
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Jonathan Charles
{K:5389} 3/26/2005
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Dramatic shot and good use of limited DoF. Great model.
If I were printing it I would make some minor mods, especially bringing out the shadow detail in her hair, warming the skin tones and de-emphasising her back by shading and altering the perspective - I hope you don't mind if I show you what I mean...
Best wishes, Jonathan
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Jon O'Brien
{K:11271} 3/27/2005
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I quite like what you've done, and I have to admit I can't figure how you did it vis a vis the perspective. The back bothered me as it looks almost like she's got a bit of a hump. I had tried cropping it but lost to much head. After seeing your work I tried playing with the perspective controls in PSP and the results were, well.. interesting, let's just say. I did have some success with the clone brush but I ton't think that's what you did.
I did try this as a more "arty" black and white, with the below results.
Cheers, and thanks for your time and effort.
Jon
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Jonathan Charles
{K:5389} 3/28/2005
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Hi Jon. The B&W print looks dramatic and as you say "arty" though the crop is a bit close for my taste.
My mod involved using "skew" on the right 40% bringing the top right corner down on a duplicated layer, then the filter > distort > pinch on the upper 60% of this area until it looked about right. Then I shaded it progressively using a very feathered selection (I could have used a gradient mask but it takes longer to set up). Sounds quite complicated but it only took about 3 minutes (including a bit of fiddling with curves to lift the shadows).
Best wishes, Jonathan
PS please let me know if you prefer I do not tinker with your photos.
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Jon O'Brien
{K:11271} 3/28/2005
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Hello, Jonathan - please, tinker away!
Jon
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Omar Amroussy
{K:4085} 4/24/2005
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good work
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Andre Denis
{K:61621} 5/1/2005
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Hi Jon,
Judging from this portrait, I would say the classes are paying off!
Andre
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