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Andrea Musi
{K:1622} 8/28/2005
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Hello Tugba,
the composition is good and there is an idea of graphism in your photograph with these four lines crossing the picture. To improve this shot you should try to choose a better moment in the day with a better light condition and, why not, a beautiful sky with clouds and a sunset. I know you can find this a little bit trivial, but you have to notice that there is a lack of a really strong element that attract the eye. Often, such a thing will be a caracter or a moving object. Here, everything is quite static. So, the decisive moment to shot will be given by the sky and the light, that are the only two elements that change with time. Hope this will help you.
Regards
Andrea
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Bulent Ozturk
{K:6884} 8/29/2005
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Nice composed
Welcome to U.F.
Regards,
The Kuru
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Toshi
{K:12024} 8/29/2005
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Hi Tugba, this is a great idea for a shot. I think if you captured just the lines and lamp post it would be more effective. The buildings on the sides are a bit distracting. And I agree with Andrea about the colors - a different time of day or playing with the light in an image editing program could give it more impact. Just my opinion! And thank you very much for your comments on my photo :)
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Tugce Gül Baran
{K:5115} 8/30/2005
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gider ayak diagonal mi birakiyorsun bizi. umut ediyorum bir aralik bulursam sairin dedigi gibi yine denizlere dönmeyelim dizesini tutturum o zaman. Iyi ol.
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Tugba Alkan
{K:189} 8/30/2005
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Kendi döngüsünü tamamlayan yazgı denilen şey girer araya..gizem seven insan
bir anda kendini paralel kaosta bulur..İnatla üzerine gidilir bıkmadan usanmadan.Kavram karmaşası yapılır mu bilinmez..
nedir diye sorulur neden niçin..oysa bilinmez her defasında biraz daha götürür kendinden kelimeler..diyorum ya aslında her şey bir oyundur..Başkasından ziyade kendine oynadığın bir oyundur bu..Benim oyuncağım gemiler...Bilirsin sen..Beklerim efem: )
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