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Image Title: weathered screen
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| Photographer |
Jacqui {K:1283}
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| Project |
#43 Unusual Vision
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Camera Model |
Kodak Digital
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| Categories |
Abstracts
Still Life
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| Portfolio |
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Lens |
N/A
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| Uploaded |
9/9/2005 |
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N/A
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ISO / Film Speed |
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| Views |
150 |
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| Favorites |
0
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Aperture |
f/ |
| Critiques |
3 |
Rating |
Critique Only Image
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| Location |
City - Longmeadow
State - MASSACHUSETTES
Country - United States
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| About |
used a little bit of PS...this part of the door on our second posrch believe it or not. kind of a bad crop...-shrug-
comments appreciated.
I do not have a camera at the moment, at least not for another month or so. so these are pictures Im finding in my old folders.
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There are 3 Comments in 1 Pages
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Rodrigo Sanders
{K:305} 9/10/2005
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it sucks that you dont have your camera, where is it? hope you can get it back soon
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jude .
{K:14625} 9/11/2005
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Hi Jackie...I like what you tried to do here, but the skewed lines and focus detract from the composition, IMO. I tried straightening the bottom and right side in PS, but in doing so, it warped the image and perspective too much.
Then I tried a tighter crop, and converting the image to a quadtone to even out the hues. I've attached it so you can see how it looks. Levels could also be tweaked a bit.
Suggestion: next time, try bringing the focus in closer, and allowing the background to blur for DoF.
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Jacqui
{K:1283} 9/12/2005
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yes yes I do agree with you. Ill try it again once I can get my hands on a camera again.
thanks very much!
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