Compositionally I think I would have cropped the top (at the point where the trees come closest) to emphasise the long foreground and force bring the eye along the path and into the picture. It would be interesting to see the same shot with shorter exposures to darken the sky and perhaps bring out the contrasting lighting a little more strongly (which would be a different picture altogether, I realize, but you *did* ask what I thought :-]
Haha I did ask, And I thank you for the feedback. I thrive on it. Without it, how would one improve? Maybe I'll head back this week and try this again.