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naftali raz
{K:1723} 11/6/2005
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nice shot. can use some color correction for an incandescent light, focus on at least one face and cropping that spares limbs and hair, but otherwise - a great try.
oh, also, the red-eye - can be corrected too, you know?
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Mirek Towski
{K:10340} 11/7/2005
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Hello Naftali Raz! Thank You for Your critique, I see Your points. When I saw this girl on the right in the middle of the dance floor in Manguera it was like a little devil appeared on my shoulder screeming in my ear "Take this picture" so I wasn't thinking much and the results are oh well not the best. But I am still glad I took this shot. Good Luck and good to hear from You.
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Heath Roberts
{K:293} 5/12/2007
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Except for a bit of spontaniety and focus, everything else lighting, pose, hairdo,must improve. oh and "cheers"
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Mirek Towski
{K:10340} 5/12/2007
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Thanks for the attention, very original.
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Heath Roberts
{K:293} 5/12/2007
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I concur.
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